okay, so i wrote a poem in about 10 minutes and its pretty long. I dont need help on grammar or anything, cuz i can do that i just am too tired to do it right now. but if you dont mind- could you read it and tell me what you think needs to change?

does anyone rememeber a childrens poem that i think was called "i feel sick" at one point i think it goes "threw up on the floor sick, i feel fine" i think it came out of a little red maybe puffin book? Can anyone link this 2 me or type it out? cheers

it doesn’t have to be an adult poem, it can be a childrens poem!

i guess it doesnt have to be a childrens poem, it can be an adult poem if you like it a lot

IT IS A CHILDRENS POEM, THAT STARTS LIKE THIS. I AM A CHILD LOOK AT MY FACE. CAN YOU NOT SEE THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE. MY CLOTHES MAY BE PLAIN, MY HAIR A BIT FRILLED BUT THIS IS NO REASON FOR YOUR HEART TO BE CHILLED.

I am looking for a poem for my daughter about a princess or the sky. Possibly even clouds or a secret castle… It doesn’t have to be a childrens poem just something short and sweet. Thanks for any assistance.

CAn anyone think of a parody for a famous childrens poem (eg. three little pigs, little miss muffet, jack and jill etc.) It can be funny but not rude. Ok thanks =D